The world of Coca Cola was interesting. It was new and they had a Coke museum and other stuff. The first thing we saw when we got inside were huge Coke bottles that were from different countries. Then, we went to the Coke museum that had signs and other stuff that were used to advertise Coke. It had some paintings by Norman Rockwell. After that, there was a movie called Happiness factory that showed what happened when you got a Coke from a vending machine. There were little blue people that would fill the bottle with Coca Cola and then some penguins would chill it and then it would fall off a big cliff and you could get it. After that, we went to the bottling plant there that bottled cokes. it produces more than the Coca Cola place needs. Then, we went to Milestones of Refreshments where there were Coke artifacts from around the world like a delivery truck. There was also a thing that told you how much things were when Coke was 5 cents. A hotel room was 1 dollar!! At the end, there were Olympic torches. I also saw a whole bunch of Olympic pins. We also saw "The Secret Coke Formula" that was 4-d and had a lot of special effects. There was a button on the seat and when we ran into a piece of wood, it poked us in the back! Also, the seats always moved around so we were jerked from one place to another. Then, we went to Taste it where we tasted different flavors. I liked Inca Kola or Bitter Lemon.
Then, we went to Pop Culture where we saw things made out of Coke. Then, we went home.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you use paragraphs to express different topics. You should certainly use a few more.
I think you can do better by more focusing, instead of telling one after another one, this then that.
How about starting like a question to get readers' attention:
Do you know a bottle of coke was only sold for 5 cents?
When I saw this sentence, I would wonder "coke 5 cents, when, where?". So I will definitely want to continue reading to find out the answers.
Instead of telling the year directly, you can tell something like this " That was when a hotel room was 1 dollar" or some other fascinating facts.
Somethings are more important than others. Focus on the important ones.